Name: Graham Trelfer (Level 4)

Join Date: 11/2/2007 2:20 PM
Last Active: 5/2/2013 3:00 AM
Forum Posts: 159

Contests Entered: 5
Votes Received: 147

Entries Reviewed: 215

Location: London, UK
Web Site: www.londoncomedywriters.com

Biography: Although I have worked in developing entertainment formats and written voice over for a few entertainment shows and documentaries in the UK, my real passion is for script writing. I run a script group in London called The London Comedy Writers (www.Londoncomedywriters.com) which has been running for 10 years and has over 2000 registered members.

You can also check the website for a film produced called Detective Story at www.psychiccatproductions.com and sketches and shows produced under my redomelette banner at http://www.youtube.com/user/redomelette2000

Totally cherry picked reviews of my scripts.

Sexy Friends
"This works wonderfully"
"I really liked your dialogue and style of comedy"
"Really nice and tight writing style here"
"I'm not a great fan of making humour out of potential suicide"
"I laughed out loud - which is something I do rarely."
"I wish I could be that funny."

I Was A Teenage Elvis
"Wonderfully bizarre"
"This one is the coolest!!!"
"That was hilarious! Thank you for that."
"The best werestory since Teen Wolf"

Chairman Leonard
"This needs a rewrite"
"I didn't feel a real story here."
"I hate to say I don't get it, but I don't get it."
"This wasn't working for me on a number of levels"
"I would get someone to proof your work"
"I've read it twice and I still find myself very confused."

Regifted
"I haven't read your script yet, but I dig the title."
"A sweet ending, to boot!"
"I laughed out loud many times"
"It was very inventive and a lot of fun to read."
"(A) Really clever journey"
"the weird side of believable"

Achievements:

Entries: 5

Loglines